| Three Days Before
by Foxy Li
A Writer’s Challenge II Story
 
 
 
    Davik found himself wondering how  he’d ended up here. Of course he had been
    in some troubles before here and  there. But this was a new one for sure.
    His mission was supposed to be a simple  one, checking likely geological
    areas for stinthium, a metal that was rare and  precious and so far, only
    appeared in this cluster of solar systems.
 
    Three Days Before
 
    So here he was on a nice planet for  a change. Moderate volcanism, nothing
    to write home about. No poisons in the  atmosphere, animal and plant life
    seemed refreshing after so many dead worlds.  The whole thing had made him
    relaxed while he worked. Perhaps a little too  relaxed now that he had a
    chance to think about it. With everything going so  well how had he ended up
    here? The usual, a girl.
 
    Davik had been digging up an ore  sample, completely oblivious that he was
    being watched. So far none of the  natives had come anywhere near the
    volcano that he was surveying. Nor had the  natives near any of the other
    volcanoes he’d looked at come close, this was his  last survey on this
    planet. It was going exceptionally well, good amounts of  stinthium.
 
    The mining company he worked for  would send diplomats in to negotiate with
    the local peoples. But all that came  into doubt when he’d heard the soft
    click of moving rocks behind him up slope.  High enough up that foliage was
    limited, he’d turned and scanned the low brush  behind him. Davik for a
    moment didn’t see anything, but then it moved.  Crouched low, its fur
    mottled to blend in  with the rocky areas it inhabited was a quite strange
    creature, it was long  bodied, with 6 legs. Legs that seemed short, but they
    moved with grace over the  uneven ground, the back set of legs were
    powerfully built. The middle set and  front set ended in nimble almost
    hand-like paws, tipped with claws as long as  Davik’s hand, wickedly curved
    and sharp. And he’d left his blaster in the  run-about.
 
    Davik crouched, picking up his rock  splitter aiming it at the massive
    creature. Surely if it could bust up rocks  for samples it could do
    something to the beast circling above him. Davik had  his doubts on how
    effective it would be, the beast was easily three times his  length, and
    Davik was not a small man six and a half feet of muscle, his hair  and eyes
    both dark framed a scarred face. A face that at the moment showed his
    determination to survive.
 
    Above him, the creature, that the  locals called plinths skulked along the
    rocks, making its peculiar chirruping  call. As it crept closer it darted at
    Davik here and there, pushing at him,  hoping to get him running, knowing
    that it would be the fastest. As it darted  forth, Davik let loose a jolt
    from his rock splitter. The sonic blast knocked  one of the clawed hands
    back and away. The sound startled the plinth, making it  back off
    momentarily and regroup. It had never seen such a thing, But after a
    moment, its hunger drove it forward again. But this time it was more
    cautious,  chirruping softly to itself. It flowed over the rough ground like
    furry water,  a graceful flowing motion that reminded the Terran of a cat.
 
    Davik was glad when the creature  moved back, hoping he could merely
    frighten the thing away, but he didn’t press  his luck either and that might
    be his undoing. As the creature came at him  again, it didn’t aim at him,
    but at his rock splitter, trying to disarm him. It  was fast, claws flying
    at Davik from several directions at once. He blocked  them best he could but
    took a good scratch along his ribs. It burned like fire,  but after a moment
    the burn turned to a far more alarming sensation, numbness.  And the
    numbness was spreading. The urgency and fear that spiraled through  Davik
    was enough to keep him going, but it wouldn’t last long. He retreated
    towards the hole he’d made in the rock; he had stopped because of the risk
    of  rock slide in the location.
 
    Now he was hoping it would.  Scrambling over and through the dark colored
    rocks he finally got his back  against the solid rock that had been holding
    back the scree above. The plinth  followed like water over the rocks staying
    just out of reach, and when Davik  backed up against the rock, it stopped a
    moment, its prey was now cornered, and  so it attacked again, going for the
    rock splitter once again.
 
    But this time Davik did not point  the splitter at the giant hunter, but
    against the rocks behind him. With a  great crack one of the rocks
    fractured, another blast, and it gave way. With a  deep grinding noise,
    almost more felt than heard, the rocks gave way in a  torrent of
    destruction. The plinth had no time to react and was caught in the
    onslaught of debris, from tiny pebbles up to boulders larger than its head.
    It  wasn’t long before the creature succumbed to the rocks. Laying with its
    body  half buried, clawed arms resting at angles unnatural even for it.
 
    Up above Davik stayed crouched by  the big rock he’s put his back against,
    the rocks having, as he’d hoped, had  gone around it. He slowly let himself
    relax, and as he did, he slumped down,  back against the rock that saved
    him, he was breathing hard, trying to ignore  the dust kicked up, the ragged
    cut along his side still numb, blood oozing out  of his shirt. He knew he
    needed to get up, get back to the run about, the medical  kit on it, but he
    couldn’t move a muscle. The numbness spread across his chest  and abdomen,
    and he was tired, so tired.
 
    Davik put up a fight but within  moments he slumped unconscious against the
    rock.  Without his knowledge two days had passed  before he was awoken. He
    heard the sounds vaguely at first, someone, or  something was rooting around
    the rockslide. It took more effort than it should  have, but he managed to
    pry his eyes open, the first thing he saw was a nose. A  very large nose,
    pressed against his chest, he tried weakly to push it away,  succeeding
    mostly in patting the large creature beside him. As his eyes gained  focus
    beyond that he could see it was one of the creatures he’d seen a great  deal
    of near plains. On the plus side, it didn’t seem inclined to eat him. On
    the other hand, it was covered in straps that attached to a flat pad running
    along its back. Like the plinth it had six legs, but its were long and
    sturdy,  made for running.
 
    Another clack of rock on rock made  him jump, and jerk his eyes from the
    strange, but friendly seeming creature, to  lock onto the figure below him,
    she was short, and sturdily built, like all the  natives he’d seen on his
    scans. She was wearing heavy thick gloves and wielding  a sharp blade that
    looked too familiar. A plinth claw, of course it would be a  plinth claw.
    She was holding the handlike paw, and cutting into it under the  claws, and
    draining the resulting liquid into a series of small clay jars.
 
    Rae’lyk had no idea that the single  man had awakened. How one man had
    managed to take down a plinth she had no  idea, it took all her tribe’s men,
    and they often lost a few to the poison they  sought during a plinth hunt.
    Though the man still lived, she did not expect it  to last much longer, no
    one survived the poison for more than a day. Once she  was done harvesting
    the poison, securing the lids and pots in their bag, taking  every
    precaution she could, she turned to her selith and tied the bag to the  long
    pad along it’s back, then she went to the man and was astonished to see  him
    not just awake but moving, even if weakly.
 
    She pressed a hand to his forehead,  it was hot to the touch, infection had
    taken hold over the poison. Davik tried  to push her hand away, alarmed at
    having a native so close, but she easily  overpowered him though she was
    almost half his size. She spoke in low soothing  tones to him, of course he
    had no idea what she was saying, but in his half  aware state it was
    soothing, so soothing that he drifted off again, as she  pulled his shirt
    up, sure enough he’d been scratched, yet he lived.
 
    Rae’lyk shook her head, the beads on  her headband clinking softly together.
    She should leave him here. Let him go  peacefully, yet he was still alive,
    and fighting. Stranger though he was, he  deserved a chance. She stripped
    the shirt from his torso, and tore it to  strips, she carefully cleaned the
    ragged gouge, the water broke away some of  the scabbing. He’d carry this
    mark the rest of his life, however long that  might be. With the rest of the
    strips, she carefully and gently bound his ribs,  staunching the slow
    bleeding.
 
    Davik drifted in and out as she  dealt with his wound, it hurt, but hurt was
    better than not feeling. At least  that was what he hoped. He’d wondered
    what the natives were like, well now he  was finding out. The woman helping
    him was no longer in the fresh breath of  youth. Time had given some
    character to her features. Up close they didn’t look  so different to Davik.
    Her eyes were green, a green impossible in humanity  unaltered and slit
    vertically rather than round, and her hair red, long and  flowing down her
    back, with only the headband and a few braids keeping it in  place. Her skin
    was soft when she touched him and had the rick brown tones of  walnut.
 
    Now that Rae’lyk had decided to take  this strange pale man with her, she
    had a problem. He was much larger than she  and she was unsure if her selith
    could carry double all the way back to the  village. Standing she tapped the
    selith’s legs asking it to kneel. He snorted  and tossed his head, selith’s
    didn’t like to be vulnerable, and with the smell  of the plinth nearby, but
    it trusted her and after a moment slowly knelt its  two front sets of legs
    down. That would make it somewhat easier… she hoped.  Davik was weak but
    semi-aware when she came back to him, she took the arm on  his good side and
    tried to lift him. Nothing happened, he was even heavier than  she thought.
    But he seemed to get the idea that she wanted him on his feet, and  when she
    tried again, he helped sore and wobbly as he was, between them both  they
    got him on his feet.
 
    Once standing she was astonished at  his size, he’d looked smaller on the
    ground hurt and bleeding, why he was even  bigger than her brother the
    chief. Thankfully for the pair it was only a few  steps to the selith’s
    side, she managed to get him seated on the back of the  pad, though he began
    to slide off the other side, she steadied him, then used  several straps to
    secure the large man’s body. Tapping her mount’s legs again  it rose slowly,
    balancing his load effortlessly. Seeing that she mounted up in  front of the
    man and guided the selith back towards the forest. With a soft  click of her
    tongue, she urged him on.
 
    Once under the cover of the forest  she relaxed a bit, they were out of the
    realm of the plinths. They stayed out  of the trees. It took hours before
    she reached a likely camp site. By then she  was nearly as tired as her
    passenger and her selith was showing some signs of  wear. It was much easier
    easing Davik off the selith than it had been getting  him on. If he survived
    the night, tomorrow might be even harder. She tapped the  selith’s legs
    again, and dragged the semi-conscious man off it’s back and  stretched him
    out on the ground. Rae’lyk covered him with her blanket and went  to start a
    small fire to make something to eat. Dried meats and plants were  dropped
    into a small pot with water to soften and warm up. She didn’t know if  he
    would eat, but she did manage to get a tiny bit of water into him.
 
    But whether he survived would be up  to him. The fact that he’d made it this
    far was astounding to the tribal  healer. She watched him throughout the
    evening before eventually curling up for  the night herself, leaning against
    her selith that knelt down to sleep away  from the smoke of the fire.
 
    The night was long, but warm enough.  As the forest woke around them Rae’lyk
    woke with it. She rested a while,  relishing the quiet sounds of the
    creatures as they began their day. The fire  had dwindled to nearly nothing
    overnight and was easily rebuilt enough for some  morning tea. Rae’lyk sat
    and drank her tea, still pondering how this giant of a  man was still alive,
    he’d taken quite a brutal scratch along his ribs, any of  her clan’s
    warriors would have died days ago. Was it because he was so large?  Was it a
    trait of his clan? She’d never seen anyone quite like him, tall and  broad,
    skin almost like the snow of winter.   But no answers were forthcoming. She
    needed to get some medicine into  him, some water and nourishment, but she
    did not have the proper things with  her.
 
    Nearby her selith still rested, and  she went to the man, she tried to wake
    him, but at best he was semi-conscious  she managed to get him sitting up,
    then together they got him kneeling, there  would be no standing today. With
    help from Rae’lyk, he made it, crawling to the  selith and mounted it again.
    She quickly did away with her fire and mounted in  front of him again.
 
    The ride back to the village  thankfully went smoothly, as she entered the
    village the people at first went  to greet her, then were left staring and
    silent at the large passenger she  carried with her, she approached her hut
    a small crowd formed around her and  followed. She stopped in front and slid
    down, turning to the selith she had it  kneel again, before she could pull
    Davik down, several of the clan’s warriors  stepped forward and, between
    them managed to get him off the worn-out animal,  and at Rae’lyk’s silent
    gestures, carried him into her hut, laying him out, on  her sleeping place,
    though he took up far more space than the petite healer.
 
    She ducked inside and started a  small fire in the rock lined fire pit, she
    pulled several small pouches and  jars, mixing things into the water pot
    above the flames. The crowd outside  split slightly, one person taking the
    selith to rest and be fed, another ran to  find the chief, Rae’lyn’s
    brother. The rest spent time milling about, taking  turns peeking inside.
    Whispering about who this person was and why he was so  weak.
 
    As the chief arrived the crowd split  to let him through. He went to the
    door of his sister’s hut and peered inside  curiously, even he was awestruck
    at what his sister had brought home this time  and stood there watching for
    a good few minutes.
 
    Laying quietly on the bedding Davik had been hardly  aware of being moved
    into the hut, but the movement had caused enough pain to  rouse him somewhat
    he’d just managed to open his eyes but when he did, the  barbarian chieftain
    filled the door of the crude, woven reed hut. After three  days without food
    or drink, he could hardly lift his head to look.
 
 THE END © 2024 Foxy Li
 Bio: An avid reader, Foxy Li is just beginning to write
more than fan-fiction. She spends much of her time drawing, writing and
making jewelry. This story was inspired by a writing challenge prompt,
number forty.... E-mail: Foxy Li Comment on this story in the Aphelion Forum 
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