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Car Trouble

by Kent Rosenberger




A yellow left turn signal winked on as the candy apple colored Corvette approached the newly reddened traffic signal. Other cars behind it were quick to follow suit. Jessica muttered an inaudible curse as she braked to appease light. Kicking herself in her mind for not screaming through the yellow, she slumped back into the black vinyl seat for what she knew would be a two-and-a-half minute wait for the green.

Before her, reaching into the thick the woodland beyond the busy intersection, lay the dark and winding street named Coal Mine Road. Though a light fog hung constantly just in the distance, Jessica could clearly make out the thirty feet or so of dirt road, just barely wide enough to allow two cars to pass side by side, before it dropped from view down a steep incline. The tree line just past the point where the road disappeared told her a sharp curve was cut through the wood, the beginning of a three mile winding trail to nowhere.

It was an ugly sight.

Automatically she removed her plastic coffee mug from the bracket attached to the dash board, drew a long sip, then closed her eyes, concentrating on nothing but the absorption of caffeine.

Much better, she thought.

Her wish for the afternoon rush hour traffic to dissipate into a far off Jamaican beach sadly remained ungranted as her eyes fluttered back open to see only that stupid, useless dirt path across the street, interrupted regularly with bustling cross traffic.

Stupid kids, was the only thought she had as she replaced her cup and flipped through the pages of this morning's newspaper strewn across the unoccupied passenger seat. Large black letters headlined the front page, stating:

THIRD MYSTERIOUS CAR CRASH BAFFLES POLICE


Jessica had read the article twice, as well as the previous two about the same subject. Coal Mine Road was getting a reputation for accidents with no apparent cause. Three times in the last two weeks wrecked cars had been found along the twisting back road headed toward the abandoned mine. Each time no bodies were found, dead or alive, at the scene, and as far as the police could tell there was no evidence of anyone leaving the scene. Until further investigation, no names of the vehicle owners would be released.

Incompetent bastards, Jessica mused to herself. It's obvious some speed-crazy teens are joyriding, probably drunk or high or something, then taking off after wiping out before they have to answer a lot of questions, take a Breathalyzer, or face their parents. Why else would names be withheld from the press? She turned away from the accompanying photo, looked at the deep woods beyond the cars rushing to get home in time for the evening news.

If the cops were smart, Jessica calculated, they would block off the road all together. Then these ridiculous traffic patterns wouldn't be such a pain.

As it stood now, because the highway was built only half a mile south of the forest, the growing number of cars had to be herded toward it while disturbing as little of the woods as possible. About seventy years ago a six square mile section, including the coal mine, which was in full operation at the time, was declared state land. The state, in their infinite wisdom, decided to make a National Park out of most of it, leaving small, untouched sections of wild land along its outskirts. Major construction was not allowed through any portion of the land, so a two-lane strip of road was built skimming its borders, taking business people to and from the interstate. Unfortunately two problems occurred at this particular light. Number one, the busy highway access got the right of way two minutes and thirty seconds for every twenty-five seconds of the adjoining avenue on which Jessica now waited. And secondly, because of the quirky placement of Coal Mine Road, the left lane was used for both left turns and straight ahead traffic. Jessica had counted off only thirty seconds, knowing she would be stranded at this inconvenient light for at least four times as long while the right turn lane kept moving, occasionally someone bothering to look before taking advantage of the turn-right-on-red-after-stop luxury.

Deciding to make good use of her otherwise wasted time, Jessica peered into the rear view mirror to make some minor adjustments to her appearance before arriving at her workplace. This swing shift crap was killing her, she knew, yet she was willing to sacrifice normal bankers hours and settle for watching her favorite television shows on video at her own convenience in order to gain the pay increase of fifteen percent for her trouble, Still, it had to stop, or at least slow down, soon. The circles under her eyes were beginning to show deeply and more often. It was only a matter of time before cosmetic touches would not do the trick in hiding them.

But the special attention she paid to her looks and whatever prime waking circumstances handed to her by Mother Nature, not to mention this third cup of coffee being injected into her system, could keep her from noticing the strange apparition reflected to her from behind.

The silver compact car, a Volkswagen of some kind she guessed, appeared normal enough, as did the young driver, a man of no more than twenty, dressed in a three piece business suit, bobbing his head to whatever musical selection was playing on his stereo system. His left turn signal mimicked hers. Probably a brown-noser who hasn't made it to the BMW stage, she estimated. She was about to pull her ever-accessible mascara brush out of her purse for a one minute and ten second touch-up, when a lightning-fast movement caught her attention in the mirror. Before she could make any definite observations, the four by four pick-up approaching her on the right rumbled to halt in the narrow shoulder, grinding with a sound resembling her stomach before breakfast.

She didn't have to see the truck to know what the problem was. All flat tires sound the same. Strange, she thought. I didn't see anything on the road for miles that could have caused such a deep gash. It was as if someone had skewered the tire with something the size of Excalibur.

Curious, she searched the mirror for an answer.

She found it.

Blinking and shaking her head would not make it go away. All the caffeine in six cups of coffee would not be enough to dislodge the image from her eyes.

As far back as the Volkswagen was from her rear bumper she could make out the area just beneath its front two wheels. At first she had mistaken the awkward protrusion hanging just inside the black shadow under the hood as a loose fan belt or tree branch, harmlessly wedged under the car, dragging along. That was until twin yellow eyes, glowing like flowing lava, peered out from underneath.

She caught her breath as two murky black pupils met hers in the mirror. A moment later a third incandescence between the eyes, slightly lower, gurgled and bobbed soundlessly. A mouth perhaps?

Jessica shut her eyes tight, wishing the impossible illusion away, replacing it with her Jamaican fantasy. It remained, locked into her gaze, when she reopened them. As if to further challenge her quickly diminishing sanity, it waved what looked like a tiny, inky tentacle from behind the front passenger wheel of the Volkswagen. Others followed, popping in and out of view from either side of the car, sneaking from shadow to sight and back again, caressing doors and tires, flowing slickly like oil.

Her head whirling about her, she noticed she alone was observing this nightmare. Everyone else was either locked into their own driving mode, or awaiting the change of the light with varying degrees of patience. All cross traffic passing in front of her was blocked from the hideous view by her car, not that anyone with no intention of turning would look in this direction anyway. To her right the unfortunate pick-up driver inspected his mysteriously punctured tire, scratching his head, and looking around on any unoccupied portion of asphalt for an answer. Somehow she knew he would not find one.

She glanced back in her mirror. The thing was still there, firmly affixed in place, holding aloft a sharp-looking tentacle tip. A victory stance? she wondered.

Inside her, an intersection light timer reminded her there were forty-five seconds in which she could act. She had to do something, if not for the guy in the car behind her, for the sake of her own state of mind. This was all happening far too fast. She had to be cautious. Her breathing quickened voluntarily.

With the speed of molasses her hand gripped against the plastic door release and pulled inward. Keeping her attention on the mirror, she pushed out at the sound of the click. Maybe if she could get the driver's attention by feigning car trouble...

It was no good. At the slightest sound the ghoulish eyes slanted in on each other, suddenly aware and displeased. The tentacle once held in triumph was now being waved in threatening circles, pointing toward her cracked door. A moment of hesitation lingered forever as she debated. How in the world could it see her in the mirror? Did it know what she was trying to do? More importantly, if she continued her intended plan, would it be able to strike her at this distance? Without being seen? Without giving itself away?

She stopped. A second look at the puzzled truck driver now undertaking the laborious process of removing five oversized lug nuts with inadequate equipment for the job answered her question. A single flash, if that, is all anyone would see, or admit to seeing. Any harm to her most likely would be dismissed as her own clumsiness in removing herself from the car in traffic on a highway just slightly slick with dampness and impeded by light fog.

Overcome by fear and the unknown, she pushed the door open wide, only to slam it shut in defeat. Others around her would regard it as nothing more than a case of an improperly closed door. Nothing unusual.

How much time was left? Suddenly she was unsure.

What could she do? Sitting at the green light, blocking the steady flow of traffic, was not an option. The only accomplishment there would be irate drivers and, with her luck, a citation. Calling for help, she knew, would do no good. People didn't stop to help anymore. Especially not when they're tired and heading home from a hard day's work. How many times had she breezed by cars pulled to the side of the road, emergency lights on hood up, smoke gushing into the sky? She could not say. All she knew was the set of circumstances that could not exist staring at her through a six inch wide piece of reflective glass had plans and purpose. She found herself sucking her coffee cup dry, her heart pounding a mile a minute, with precious few seconds left to think.

Panicked, Jessica tossed her empty plastic cup aside, a sudden caffeine rush getting the best of her. The spent mug careened gracelessly to the floor on the passenger side. Her eyes followed it, but stopped in mid-arc as the cup kept going.

Her eyes met the newspaper headline, still facing her from the passenger seat. The pieces of a horrible puzzle locked together. The accidents, that thing, all the missing people...

"Oh my God!" she breathed. It was a helpless, feeble cry.

Reality returned to Jessica in the form of an abrupt car horn beeping impatiently behind her. All cross traffic had stopped, she realized, and the green light had begun another brief existence. Her eyes flashed to the mirror. Behind her the yuppie had pulled closer to her rear, his head still bopping, his mouth moving, no doubt lip syncing a song. The creature, and the entire underside of his car, was out of her sight.

Out of choices and time, she applied pressure to her gas pedal, creeping into her turn, dividing nervous attention between the road before and behind her.

For a moment she noticed the face of the ill-fated young man. It was confused, instantly frustrated, then in pained strain as he forced at his somehow frozen steering wheel, inexplicably unable to turn it to follow the red Corvette. Without warning, it took off like a shot, straight ahead, barreling across the highway and down the foggy, twisting dirt path of Coal Mine Road.

Jessica witnessed the final flash of emotion cross the shocked young man’s face just before he disappeared from view. It was sheer horror, his eyes wide, both hands off the wheel, pounding at the window.

And then he was gone.

Other cars fell in behind Jessica, forcing her to proceed forward. She knew the police would never believe her if she went to them with such a story. They would also question her on how she knew so much about this particular accident, maybe even somehow involve her in whatever fate lay in store for the Volkswagen and its occupant. She wondered how many other people stifled away the same secret?

Jessica floored the gas pedal and hurried off, racing the clock, mentally plotting out an alternate route to work for the next day. At least she would have some extra time to test one tomorrow, she mused. It would not be necessary to stop for coffee and a newspaper.

She had a pretty good idea of what the headline was going to be.



THE END


© 2017 Kent Rosenberger

Bio: Kent Rosenberger is the author of over thirty e-books available for review at Amazon.com/kindle and Barnesandnoble.com under his name, including novels, poetry and short story collections. His work has previously been published in such magazines as 365 Tomorrows, Big Pulp, Weird Year, The Absent Willow Review, Orion’s Child, Title Goes Here, Flash Shot, Resident Aliens, Death Throes, Schlock!, The Digital Dragon, Danse Macabre, Aphelion and Bumples. He is also the winner of the 2011 Title Goes Here short story contest.

E-mail: Kent Rosenberger

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