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Messin' with the Kid


by Roy Dorman




The phone woke Beth just after she had slipped into a deep sleep.
 
“Hello?” she answered hesitantly.
 
She and Allan were on a two-week vacation in the Clarksdale, Mississippi, area.  Allan was a musician and was interested in the little towns in that part of Mississippi that were rich in the history of the Blues.  Actually, he wasn’t a fulltime musician.  His day job as a high school English teacher paid the bills, but on weekends and vacations, he considered himself a musician.  Beth had been a history major in college, so she was always game for going places with him that had historical significance.
 
“Beth, it’s me,” Allan whispered.
 
“Allan?  Where the hell are you?  It’s almost midnight,” Beth said with some alarm in her voice.  She was now wide awake and sitting up in bed.  They had eaten dinner at a blues bar; catfish, hushpuppies, and cold beers, and had stayed to listen to music until about 10:30.  They had come back to their motel room and Allan had said that he wanted to go out and have a cigarette before bed.  She had fallen asleep and when the phone rang, she had been surprised that Allan wasn’t in bed with her.
 
“Beth, you have to come and pick me up.  Right now, Beth,” said Allan, still whispering, but now oddly insistent.
 
“But where are you, Allan?  Did you take the car?”
 
“No, I don’t have the car; I walked.  I’m about two miles from Lucille’s.  Just turn left as you leave their parking lot and drive ‘til you come to the first intersection.”
 
“Allan, that’s crazy.  What are you doing out there?”
 
“I had some business to take care of; music business.”
 
“Allan, we don’t know anybody in Clarksdale.  Nobody here even knows that you’re a musician.”
 
“Beth.  You have to come get me right now.  I’m serious.  I may be in some danger. Please come now and don’t ask any more questions.”
 
“Alright, Allan, but I’m really pissed; you have a lot of explaining to do when I get there,” said Beth.  She hung up the phone, threw on some clothes, and went out into the motel parking lot.  Driving through town toward Lucille’s, she mentally cussed out Allan for being such a bonehead, but part of her was a little worried.  He had sounded so serious when he had said he could be in danger.
 
At the first intersection she came to after Lucille’s, she pulled over onto the shoulder and got out of the car.
 
“Allan,” she called.  Nothing.  Silence.  Not even crickets or frogs calling to mates.  Not even the echo of her voice.  Scary.
 
“Allan, where are you?” she called again into the darkness.  Still nothing at all.  It was very dark here at the crossroads.  She was about two miles from Lucille’s and hadn’t passed any other businesses or houses on the way.  There were no streetlights out here.  She was “out in the country” as they had called it when they were kids.
 
“Allan, answer me right now or I’m going back to the motel without you.”
 
“Allan’s not here,” said a deep voice from behind her and a little to her left.  “He’s in Clarksdale at Lucille’s Blues Bar.  He has a gig.”
 
The way “gig” had come out sounded like the person behind the voice was amused by the term.
 
“Look, whoever you are,” Beth said with confidence she didn’t really feel.  “Unless you can tell me where Allan is, you can go to hell.  I’ve had it;  I’m outta here.”
 
“So I ‘can go to hell,’ you say.  That’s a very interesting choice of words.  Almost poetic in this situation.”
 
There was that hint of amusement again.  Beth slowly turned in a complete circle.  She still didn’t see anyone.
 
“Who are you and where you?” Beth whispered.  “What do you mean Allan is at Lucille’s?”
 
“It’s quite simple.  Allan came down to the crossroads and made a business deal.  With me.  You’re part of the deal, Beth.  Allan drove a hard bargain, but as is usual in my dealings with desperate people like Allan, I think I got the better of the deal.”
 
Beth whimpered when she felt a heavy hand clutch her shoulder from behind.  However, when she whirled around, the surprise was on the face of her stalker.  Beth’s interest in history had caused her to make a quick stop at the Catholic Church on the way to the crossroads.  In one hand, she held a large crucifix and in the other a small jar of holy water.
 
“That stuff only works if you believe, Beth.  We both know that you don’t believe.”
 
“I’m counting on you to be the one doing the believing, asshole,” Beth said as she threw the holy water in his face and shoved the top three inches of the crucifix into his throat.
 
Beth drove back to the motel, packed her things, and was on the road in less than an hour.  After weeks of not hearing from Allan, she put all of his things in a storage locker.  Mutual friends asked her about him; Beth told them that he had decided to stay in Clarksdale.  When the new school year started in the fall, Allan was still missing.
 
When Beth was four, a neighbor boy who was six tricked her into playing doctor.  Later, when Beth found out that she had been taken advantage of, she was furious.  Many times throughout her life people were surprised at the depth of her reaction when she thought someone was using her.  She didn’t like it at all.  Not at all.



THE END


© 2014 Roy Dorman

Bio:Roy Dorman is retired from the University of Wisconsin-Madison Benefits Office and has been a voracious reader for over 60 years. In retirement, he is now also a voracious writer and he has had poetry and flash fiction published recently in a number of online literary sites.


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